Rawmin's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Notorious B.I.G. - Dead Wrong]

So anyways

Just so you know, you cannot use ANYTHING that is not yours in your song, such as the a cappella you used. Not just because you've made a legal claim that everything in this song is yours, and it clearly is not, but because doing things like that can cause Newgrounds to get in trouble (ie sued). That just doesn't seem fair to Tom.

Regardless, Im going to review the song now. Overall, it is mastered rather well, but, it seem like the lyrics are a little loud in the mix. It could use some more variety in the background, but as it is, its not bad.
I like some of the rhythmic effects applied in the backgrounds, and i disagree with the guy below, because it sounds to me like the vocals match up quite nicely with the beat.

My suggestion is that from now on, you should try and get people to do original rap for you. There are some pretty good rappers on NG (warspawn being one that I know of). As a bonus, it will be both amazing, and original, and trust me, you'll be much prouder of the result.

Good Day!
7/10
4/5

MoniMC responds:

lol i love you
:D thanks for the good info
i will use it

[Assertive Mood _ RR]

Pretty cool!

The key change actually makes it seem a little happier now, and i think I like it better, so I guess I'm an assertive person, :P

RenoakRhythm responds:

Check mark next to assertive... i think its winning! lol.

Thanks for the reviews... :)

[Fucking (Around) w/Hardware]

Holy Awesome!

This is really cool, and your little story was really interesting, not that I'm totally sure I understood everything...

BTW WHY HAS NO ONE REVIEWED THIS YET! GEEZ, COME ON!

TB-303 responds:

Thanks :)

And you're still the only one :P

[Competent Mood _ RR]

Cool track!

Nice feel to it, and I like that lead. Quite well mastered as well, and great job on keeping it interesting!

RenoakRhythm responds:

awesome thanks for the review... i'm was surprised to hear you say that about the mastering as well... since i made it in 3 hours.... that was my major concern.... phew.

Appreciate teh words.

[TF - Pray For It ]

Wow great song

I like the synths, as well as the feel, and I absolutely love the way you set up the transition around the loop! Good stuff!

Transformer responds:

thank you!

[Starve Amongst Feasts--_--]

I really love this song

I've been trying to make some goa, but i've found its hard to come up with stuff to shove in there... any tips?

PERVOK responds:

If it sounds weird and it sounds good rhythmically, put it in there.

[(a10)lolio wit my lolipop^^]

Its rather minimal

It could use more instruments, some better samples, and a more listener-friendly melody. But i think your on the right track!

a10fjet responds:

yea i know. it only had like three instruments and drums. haha. but i only spent a hour on it. you cant expect much. but thanx. and yes, my other stuff is MUCH better

[Michael M is a pree cool guy]

Its ok...

but it sounds a little distorted when the kick comes in, and I think you should try and stay away from the highly recognizable FL Studio presets and samples. Other than that, i really like the fast paced feel of the track, and i also enjoy the melody played by that slidey synth.

Blizzaine responds:

Which ones are so recognizable? PM me pl0x

[The Groove of Passion]

I like this!

Its a really nice fusion of styles, and i really like the funky drum beat! Good job!

djt820 responds:

Ah, thanks man. This is the result of many hours hours of listening to my Jazz Fusion collection. Thanks again!

[Schranz S [Demo]]

Wow and a half!

This is possibly the most intensely skull pounding thing ive heard all day!
Very dark and creepy. Good job

Arcsynth responds:

Yay, then mission accomplished. XD